I had Jill for a card exchange, so I can tell you these are nice cards!
But back to the critique: I love the way you describe the places that these cards depict -- nice language, evocative, makes me want to go there! A few of the cards could use some extra description like this.
I think for your tags, be sure to include cards and blank as tags to help people find these.
You'd separated your shop sections by place. I think if I were looking for notecards, I'd appreciate being able to click on a section called notecards and have all of my choices come up.
I love the Oscar (cat) notecard -- I wish you'd shown more images of the card, as opposed to the image of the various street teams you belong to. I know it's just the one card, but maybe show an array of the four that the person will receive set up in different ways?
Hi, Jill! I can also say that your cards are great quality as I received them too. You describe your products well. I like that you include in your description that some items are sold as sets and that the size is noted with your photos. I don't think the street team avatars need to be included. Maybe you can highlight something special in your photo instead to fill up the available photo space.
A read a few descriptions and they were well worded providing sizes, paper used, where the photo was taken-that's great! I also like your packaging options! Nice shop :o)
From what I have seen everything looks good. I like that your titles are short and your descriptions provide a lot of information about the items. One thing I did notice that you might want to change is you have shipping and return information in your both your profile and shop policies. I would think having it in your shop policies would be enough. Good luck with furture sales. Your work is wonderful!
Thanks for taking the time to look & comment, ladies!
I'm glad to know I'm on the right track with the descriptions. I'll look for the ones that need to be fleshed out a bit more, maybe make them a little more personal?
And thanks for noticing my shipping info duplication, Terri. I think I can sort that out.
I had Jill for a card exchange, so I can tell you these are nice cards!
ReplyDeleteBut back to the critique: I love the way you describe the places that these cards depict -- nice language, evocative, makes me want to go there! A few of the cards could use some extra description like this.
I think for your tags, be sure to include cards and blank as tags to help people find these.
You'd separated your shop sections by place. I think if I were looking for notecards, I'd appreciate being able to click on a section called notecards and have all of my choices come up.
I love the Oscar (cat) notecard -- I wish you'd shown more images of the card, as opposed to the image of the various street teams you belong to. I know it's just the one card, but maybe show an array of the four that the person will receive set up in different ways?
Nice solid work, though!
Hi, Jill! I can also say that your cards are great quality as I received them too. You describe your products well. I like that you include in your description that some items are sold as sets and that the size is noted with your photos. I don't think the street team avatars need to be included. Maybe you can highlight something special in your photo instead to fill up the available photo space.
ReplyDeleteA read a few descriptions and they were well worded providing sizes, paper used, where the photo was taken-that's great! I also like your packaging options! Nice shop :o)
Best!
Cara
www.CarasScrapNStampArt.etsy.com
From what I have seen everything looks good. I like that your titles are short and your descriptions provide a lot of information about the items. One thing I did notice that you might want to change is you have shipping and return information in your both your profile and shop policies. I would think having it in your shop policies would be enough. Good luck with furture sales. Your work is wonderful!
ReplyDeleteThanks for taking the time to look & comment, ladies!
ReplyDeleteI'm glad to know I'm on the right track with the descriptions. I'll look for the ones that need to be fleshed out a bit more, maybe make them a little more personal?
And thanks for noticing my shipping info duplication, Terri. I think I can sort that out.
:)